Sketch assitance

okay so last night i had assitence in drawing from a good buddy known as

now i needed his assitance simply as my proportanis, hands feet and general drawing of people was let's be honest a fail .. so with his guidance i managed to get a basic outline shape for a woman and then i added and fleshed her out and here she stands please tell me what you think as i may also post this in colour .. probably with a better title to but hey i'm not known for my quick thinking!